about me

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  1. Alyna!!

    Despite already knowing you, as I read through your ‘About Me’, I felt as if I was able to see your emotions and overall being on a deeper level. To be able to share something personal about yourself and give others pieces of your personality is an incredible gift (just like your writing!!). One thing that I especially loved was how you focused on all three periods of time: Past, Present and Future. As well as focusing on those and your growth, I really enjoyed the way that you structured it so it was past, future, present, as it made me think that you recognized the past, made a goal for the future, and was working on it in the present which truly is something that I wouldn’t have thought to do!

    The only thing that I could recommend for you to do would be for you to add a small explanation as to your growth as a person, but even without it, I feel like the piece explains itself and you extremely well!

    Please keep writing!! You know how much I love your writing, and I really want to see you grow even more!

    Fighting!
    Chloe!

    1. Dear Chloe,

      My about me was one that I had trouble with, you know, multiple drafts and I couldn’t figure out how I wanted to portray myself. I am so glad that you saw the meaning behind my About Me, because I wanted it to show my growth (like you said!). Thank you so much again. I completely agree! An explanation would’ve made this piece more explanatory to someone who couldn’t recognize the differences. Thank you so much again, your compliments mean so much to me (because you are beyond amazing)!

      Sincerely,
      alyna

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